Friday 11 September 2020

My Narrative story

 

We have been writing about a scary house. We learnt to use describing 
words and speech marks  in our story.
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  1. Anonymous21 September 2020 at 10:40

    Kia ora Ataliyah,
    I like how you added the author David Walliams!
    You had added so much detail that it felt like the story real.
    Next time you could add more about the house and not that much about the characters.

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  2. Anonymous19 October 2020 at 14:24

    Thanks Deryn for looking at my narrative story and commenting on my blog post. Next time I will add more detail to my story.

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